Lesson 3: Overview
Using Language for Laughs
Overview:
In this lesson, kids will explore how punctuation,word choice, and parts of speech can be used astools for writing comedy. By playing with language,kids will begin to understand how writers utilizerhythm, surprise, exaggeration, and awkwardnessto get a laugh. This lesson introduces kids togrammar not as rules, but as powerfultools for comedy.
Objectives:
- Understand how punctuation (periods, exclamation marks, ellipses, etc.) can be used for comedic effect.
- Use nouns, adjectives, metaphors, similes, and homophones to add humor and clarity to writing.
- Experiment with sentence rhythm, surprise, and wordplay to build comedic tone.
- Apply learned techniques to revise or enhance a comedic sentence or short story.
- Identify and discuss why certain language choices are funny.
Materials Needed:
- Seed Notebooks
- Sticky Notes
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LANGUAGE TECHNIQUES IN COMEDY
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KEVIN WORKING WITH KIDS ON WHAT IS FUNNY
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KEVIN INSIGHTS
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Lesson PDF
(1 per student)
SUL Lesson 3:
Using Language for Laughs Handout
(1 per student)
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Optional: whiteboard and markers for group brainstorming
Lesson 3 : Part 1
Mini-Lesson:
1. Welcome and Set the Tone
- Comedy isn’t just about what happens in a story – it’s also about how you tell it. The words you choose, the punctuation you use, and how you arrange your sentences can all be tools to make people laugh.”
- Share the idea that comedy writers are intentional. They make smart choices about language, rhythm, and timing to surprise their audience.
2. Language Techniques Review
- Distribute the “Using Language for Laughs” handout.
- Walk through and discuss the following sectionstogether, pausing after each to read examples and getreactions from kids:
- Punctuation for Punchlines (Periods, ExclamationMarks, Question Marks, Ellipses)
- Description Power (Nouns & Adjectives)
- Surprise & Rhythm (Conjunctions, Commas,Semi-colons)
- Wordplay (Homophones, Similes, Metaphors)
3. Sticky Note Challenge: Wall of Laughs
- Kids work in pairs or small groups. Eachgroupis assigned one technique from the handout(e.g., similes or ellipses). They write their ownoriginal funny sentence using that techniqueon a sticky note.
- Example: Ellipsis: “I told my dog to stayoff the couch… so now she sleeps on thetable.”
- Post the sticky notes on a “Wall of Laughs” andread a few aloud.
- Optional Extension: Give kids a boringsentence (e.g., “I had cereal for breakfast.”) andchallenge them to rewrite it using 2–3 of thecomedy tools.
- Example: I had cereal for breakfast. It wasa soggy, sugar-drenched survival mission.My spoon surrendered by the second bite.
Lesson 3 : Part 2
Practice:
Comedy Sentence Remix
- Kids take a story or sentence they wrote in a previous lesson and revise a section using comedic language techniques. Think about the beginning, middle, and end.
- Encourage them to:
- Add exaggerated adjectives
- Use an ellipsis or dramatic punctuation
- Add a simile or metaphor
- The educator will meet with individuals during thistime to help them start to develop their stories.
Lesson 3 : Part 3
Reflection
Seed Notebook Entry or Group Discussion:
- What language technique did you like using mosttoday? Why?
- How did word choice or punctuation change theway your writing felt?
- What’s one tool you want to use in your nextcomedy story?
Encourage kids to write a goal for next time
